Within this second Update, there are two corrections this writer has found must be revised.
Firstly:
Mr. Anderson’s wife, spelled in this update as “Christina”, is actually spelled as “Kristina”.
Secondly:
The mention of a band called “Monster Attacks The Pilot” is, in actuality, called “Monster Eats The Pilot”.
Keep these two things in mind. This writer is up for further consultation with regard to grammatical and spelling errors, as well as those considered contextual.
My 2 quotables:-
“The palm trees remain impartial to all guests, swaying only with the insistence of the seldom breeze. But what happens at their trunks, on street level, is in movement, always.”
and
“The word “good” is almost too bland a word, wit respect to language, when discussing something that refuses to mend to genre, popular culture, or any textbook approach to quite anything. This is not to say 100 Monkeys defies definition, but the point is that the question is not in defining them: it is trying to define all that is different from a band already so, well, different.”
You paint such a vivid picture, Brady.